This I believe
By Isabel Oppenheimer
When I started second grade, my mother already had ALS for a long time. I knew why she was sick and that she couldn’t do stuff that other moms could do. In the Middle of second grade my mom started to get sicker and she had to go to the hospital in Doylestown. In a couple of months she had to move to a new hospital in Philadelphia. When my mother got there she told me and my father that she didn’t really like the nurses all that much and that they weren’t very kind. My mother stayed there for a bit and I would visit her every couple of days. My mother still didn’t like the hospital very much but she got by.
One night after one of the nurses left from checking on my mother, the nurse forgot to give my mother the call bell. During this time my father was home and was tired. He was trying to decide whether or not to call the hospital and check on my mom. Back at the hospital my mother started to have trouble breathing in a few short seconds she couldn’t breathe at all. My mom was kicking her legs, trying to do anything to get the nurses attention. Back at home my father decides to call the hospital. When the nurse answers she tells him she will go and see if my mom wants to talk to my father. When she goes in she realizes that my mom can’t breathe and calls a code blue.
I wasn’t told that story right away but I knew that my mom could have died while she was in the hospital. When I was told that story a couple of years later I knew that miracles could not only happen to other people but that they could happen to me. I guess my belief is more then just miracles. I believe to have faith
Your mom is incredibily brave and loving and although she is unable to do many things moms do she still is able to do the most important thing, teach you and be there for you. She taught you how to love because of the way she loved you and she taught you how to be strong just by facing this menacing disease. I believe that you are strong and that your mom is a beautiful person inside and out and has shared her qualities with you.
ReplyDeleteYou are such a brave, strong young woman. You have two wonderful parents who love you very much. Your life experiences have helped you form your beliefs. I am so proud of your courage and the love you share with your mom.
ReplyDelete3.5/5 points. Amazing content, however, there are a variety of technical errors in this entry. For example, the last sentence needs punctuation and I think you mean to say, " I believe in having faith." Also, be sure to use a comma when you use a FANBOY in a sentence. There are several instances where you forget to do this. You are capable of correcting these errors.Be sure to reread before you post.